HOW FICTION WORKS
By JAMES WOOD

Farrar, Strauss and Giroux, 2008
ISBN13: 9780374173401
272 pages; Hardcover
Genre: Nonfiction, Literary Studies

Reviewed by Marie Mundaca

James Wood is probably the most famous literary critic in the English-speaking world. After toiling at The New Republic for over ten years, Wood made a surprise move to The New Yorker, thus cementing his place in the pantheon of celebrated critics. But what sometimes overshadows Wood's highly astute, analytical, and often enthusiastic reviews are his unkind words for authors who write in any style more modern than the modernists. It was Wood who coined the derogatory term "hysterical realism" to describe the works of authors like David Foster Wallace, Thomas Pynchon, and Zadie Smith. It has been painfully obviously that Wood prefers contemporary novels that hearken back to Flaubert and Chekhov. The magazine n+1 accused Wood of wanting to be his own grandpa. Wood is decidedly not a hipster.

But don't count Wood out. How Fiction Works has the potential to change the way its readers read and write fiction. Think of it as a high-level fiction class with a highly opinionated and super-smart professor. Very early in How Fiction Works Wood addresses his issues with contemporary authors like Wallace, Pynchon, and Don DeLillo, and it's clear that he gets what the authors are doing; he just doesn't like it.

In an early chapter on what he calls the "unidentified free indirect style," he briefly discusses Wallace's language in the short story "The Suffering Channel." Reprinting a longish passage written in what Wood calls "the ruined argot of Manhattan media-speak," he accurately notes that the passage is written from the point of view not of the main character, but "emanates from a kind of 'village chorus'—it is an amalgam of the kind of language we might expect this particular community to speak if they were telling the story." Wallace's "village chorus" technique is something rarely mentioned in reviews, but it is a style he has employed throughout his career. Reviewers have often complained that the POV and identity of Wallace's narrators are vague—that's because the narrator is everyone. Wood goes on to say, "In Wallace's case, the language of his unidentified narration is hideously ugly, and rather painful for more than a page or two."

Wallace, Pynchon, and DeLillo rely on "a risky tautology inherent in… contemporary writing: in order to evoke a debased language (the debased language your character might use), you must be willing to represent that mangled language in your text… (Wallace's) fiction prosecutes an intense argument about the decomposition of language in America, and he is not afraid to decompose—and discompose—his own style in the interests of making us live through this linguistic America with him…Auden frames the general problem well in his poem "The Novelist":.. the novelist must…'become the whole of boredom.'…Wallace is very good at becoming the whole of boredom." Despite the complete and utter diss, both of Wallace and of America patois, it is clear that Wood understands Wallace in a way other contemporary reviewers do not.

Wood covers topics such as point of view, character, consciousness, and the use of details, and he shows readers where these things do and don't work, and why. He gives readers the tools necessary to criticize any work, given time and close reading. Most of his examples are from Saul Bellow and earlier, but since he usually provides the text, knowledge of these authors is not mandatory. His examples are always clear, and in some cases he even re-writes passages to show readers in what ways they wouldn't work.

Wood's chapter on character is particularly strong, and here especially he dispenses with the least subtle of the metafictionists like John Barth, who constantly alerts the reader to the fact that the characters are not real. Instead, Wood celebrates the work of experimental writers like José Saramago and Roberto Bolaño, who subtly draw readers into a tricky game of deciding what is real and what isn't. Writing about Saramago's novel The Year of the Death of Ricardo Reis, where a pseudonym of an author continues to live after the author dies, Wood shows how an author can bypass metafiction's bluntness. "By starting with an invented character… Saramago is able to pass through the same skepticism, but in the opposite direction towards reality, toward the deepest questions. Saramago asks, in effect: But what is 'just a character'?"

The book itself is lovely. The page has a largish font with little leading, giving the book a mid-century feel. The running heads refer to the topics addressed on each spread and can be used as navigation tools, making it easy to flip through and find what is needed quickly. The jacket is printed on the reverse rough side of the stock, adding to the old-timey feel. The book should have had embossed cover materials and a stamp on the front to complete the package, but this is the sort of minutiae only hardcore bibliophiles will even notice.

Wood's footnotes, which are asterisked, are occasionally irrelevant. He quotes one particularly lovely passage from Stephen Crane's The Red Badge of Courage, where ants march across the face of a dead soldier, and the asterisk inexplicably calls the ants a cliché of cinematic grammar, recalling Luis Buñuel's Un Chien Andalou and David Lynch's Blue Velvet, leaving readers wondering how cinematic grammar relates to a pre-cinema novel. There is occasional interjection of the personal detail, but those are fairly unobtrusive. He overuses the word "you," which seems odd because he generally takes on such a scholarly tone.

In How Fiction Works, Wood has produced a contemporary classic. Armed with examples and analysis that clearly explain what does and what doesn't work in fiction, readers and writers can go forth with these standards and apply them to any written work, from Shakespeare to Palahniuk to one's own work. With Wood's clear and well-organized writing, the ideas conveyed will let readers read their favorites with fresh eyes and perhaps allow them to appreciate previously unappreciated works.

(September, 2008)

 

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